It came quietly
That first whisper of Autumn
Carried on the air
But the dying leaves held tight
And fixed their gaze on the sun
Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7
Autumn & Leaves prompt from: Ramblings of a writer
It came quietly
That first whisper of Autumn
Carried on the air
But the dying leaves held tight
And fixed their gaze on the sun
Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7
Autumn & Leaves prompt from: Ramblings of a writer
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Nice! Thanks for writing another perfect tanka poem. Appreciated
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Another perfect Tanka poem. thanks for joining in on the weekly tanka challenge Jac. Appreciated very much.
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It is a delight, and thank you for organising this and reblogging. I enjoy reading all the other variations that people come up with, what wonders we can create with two words eh?
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