Cold experience

Masks your hate in glittering

And hides the pathway

Behind your rhetoric smile

As you build walls between us

 

Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7

Pathway & Experience prompt from: Ramblings of a writer 

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5 thoughts on “Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge – Week 14 – Pathway & Experience

  1. Nice tanka. It really surprises me the many versions of writing this type of poem how many different stories that come up with the same two words, but everyone one of them has told a story completely by using only 31 syllables.
    Very interesting way of writing.
    Hope you are having a great week.

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  2. Oh wow, that’s so sweet of you 😀
    It may take me a few days to jump in, but quotes are awesome and I love spreading the word about other bloggers. Thanks babe.

    Like

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